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How to Craft
Wickedly Effective Prose

by Constance Hale

"Today's writers need more spunk than Strunk."  Thus reads the jacket to Sin and Syntax.  "Now, from copy veteran Constance Hale comes a fun, informative, indispensable guide to taking your writing from ordinary to extraordinary."
This book is divided into three parts, "Words," "Sentences," and "Music."  These, in turn, are broken into Bones (grammar sermonettes) Flesh (lessons on writing)  Cardinal Sins (true transgressions: errors made in ignorance) and Carnal Pleasures (playful, riotous, sometimes subversive pieces of writing that show how breaking the rules can lead to breakthrough prose).
"Sin and Syntax is one of the rare books that recognizes–and even celebrates–the fact that good writing has little to do with 'rules' and much to do with a true understanding of effective prose.   Connie Hale provides us an invaluable service by showing us what works and what doesn't in the real world, regardless of what the pedants say." — Jesse Sheidlower, Senior Editor of Random House Dictionaries and the author of "Jesse's Word of the Day" column.

An excerpt from the Cardinal Sins section of Words,
IF THE VERB DOESN'T FIT, YOU MUST ATTRIT.
Verbs also enter the language through back-formation, the process that gave us to rob from robber, to beg from beggar, to diagnose from diagnosis, and to babysit from babysitter.  This can make for unbridled originality, as when a senator from Utah proclaimed "I prefer a polygamist who doesn't polyg to a monogamist who doesn't monog."  Some back-formed verbs work because they are visual and their sounds evoke the action they describe: crash, hum, plop, poke, splat, swagger, waffle, whoosh, zap.
     But beware of back-formations.  They can range from the ugly (burgle, from burglar) to the awkward (televise, from television) to the downright dastardly, like enthuse, liaise, and attrit ("our air strike will attrit their armor").  Just because a verb descends from a legitimate noun does not give it a proper pedigree.

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